A Hidden Comer

[Karma.]

[ooc: er, karma is still in the forest temp...whatever, i guess i'll make her come back.]

The minx with the darkest soul stared into nothing, mind reeling with thoughts and emotions. As her breathing had increased, so had her overwhelming sadness. The fact that she had given up on a foal with Magick made her heart sink into a black bottomless pit. Closing her eyes against the dreadful world she was forced to deal with day after day, she collapsed onto the earth. Pine needles and soft dirt was underneath her as her mind refused to shut off. She knew that none, especially Magick, liked her, so what was the point? Finally her stubborn persistance got in the way once again as she jerked her lids open, standing quickly. A hard and determined look was set to her eyes, a blazing fire erupting.

Shaking off her chocolate coat, she took in the first scent of this land. Looking down sheepishly, she did not realize that her newly added scent would allow anyone to be able to follow her with ease. Trotting back, she thought over her plan, her mission. She would prove to them all, she was not a quitter and she didn't care what any of the others thought. Breaking free from the forest barrier, she slowly and hastily came yards away from the group. ANOTHER?! So the two were not good enough?! Lowering her maw nearly to the earth, her heart seemed to have torn in half. It had turned black since her visit to Maleck, hardly beating only to stay alive. Anger, fury, sadness, and determination was set in her eyes.

Heading over to the group, she made sure to stand far away from Magick and the new one that was obviously trying to get him to mate with her as well. How could they even think of such a thing when they knew what he had done? Nevermind though, for she was going to get just what she wanted. Opening her maw, she closed it tightly, for the ess from before had stood beside her. About to step away, she heard her words. Standing silently for a few moments, Karma then spoke with hushed tones.

I admire your courage enough to apologize. It shows strength on your part. But before I can ever accept your apology, you must show me that you truly are different like you say.

Even giving a thought to accepting an apology was new for her. Karma was usually a "you hurt me once, I hate you forever" type of mare, which was how she currently felt towards this stallion as well. Glancing back hesitantly at Magick, she tried with all her might not to look away from him and his new prize. Boy, did he go though them quick. Karma had one simple goal in mind, however accomplishing it, especially due to the fact that she detested Dark Magick as he did her, made it quite difficult...lead fae.

[Temptation]

She wasnt the one to side on things but she too,as Karma,grew a trick of hate for the 'pair' standing side and side.Thought now she knew how Karma had felt coming pon her and MAgick,her asking Magick to breed the heat from her,to rid her from the insanity.She sighed,a wince of glee formed as she grew a hunger for one certant thing.....a foal,something she could love when her hessian went to anyother minx, something to follow her in times of need,something to love her back.She felt so sick,the thoughts sounded so light yet so understandable.Yet the hessian Magick wouldnt do as she asked,No , he wouldnt give her the one thing she ever wanted. ...made...born..first breaths..first looks...mother hood...its life...
No one understood her seeing she was younger than most dams,thought had she lived round hessians her whole life, no dam to take her in and teach her right from wrong,and still would a dam have saved her from the cursing that lay within after a breed?No.Not her dam,her dam had left her the second she had come to breath,after she had to fend for herself and beat off the ever so tempted hessians.That mattered not here,not now,not ever would none find out either.Life seemed to spoil her rotten,she had always been lucky,she had been born beautiful,she was made so elegant,and she had the life of a fine dark indeed,yet that one thing was unhaveable to her in this so say 'perfect' life.Blue orbs gazed at nothing still,thorns swiveled 'top her dome,taking on every word,by time had she readied to answer Karma,though she hadnt the know as what to say.Blood lathered kissers parted as she spoke softly,only the brezze carried her words to Karma.

And shall i try once more to show you that im trying,that im not as you thought with first looks.Never,never,ever judge a book by its cover...never

words seemed to be whispered,her gaze soon came back to the earth.Trying to 'reboot' she shook her cerebrum tasticly,cream dreads formed up like a rollercoster then shaded back down onto her sweat coated sereprntine.Sweet heat scent of both minx's side by side was strong yet she cared not,the more the better,for if Magick didnt want to give her what she wanted then he would deal with the 'temptation' of her and Karma.She hadnt once looked to that 'other' minx nor Magick since she entered the plains of melack,she didnt know why but the time to look at them 'playing' was useless and pittiyful[sp?]She wasnt the one to hold grudges but this time she had.She snorted,nares flaring ragingly,she felt as if to say hold me back ,now, hold me back while you can,for life is short and i wont care if mine ends short she didnt know why the rage formed but it had,all at once she had felt these many things, sadness, rage, anger , fate and love life wasnt what she had expected in Melack,yet it some what was in her mind worse,the way she loved things,bad and always bad.The time had come to ask ,just ine thing to Karma,being only one or two years older she may have know the answer to this question or maybe not,maybe she too was looking for the same answer?She didnt know if she was ready to say it to Karma,the words kept playing over and over in her mind,deciding weither to speak or keep shut?!Kissers parted but then closed the words went over her mind once more,before she spoke, Karma....why are you still here?Why after all the trouble,all the sadness in just few hours,your still here?im saying this only because im thinking the same thing to myself. that was it,thats what she was ready to say to Karma,now or never.

Karma....why are you still here?Why after all the trouble,all the sadness in just few hours,your still here?im saying this only because im thinking the same thing to myself

She shook her cerebrum at her words,snickering at herself quitely and then looking to Karma for answers,hoping she could answer this for herself and me.The time had come ever since she had watched Karma 'fued' over Magicks 'ways' of reaction and the way she must have felt inside.No right now she was thinking vice versa of dark,she needed to think of what she knew of,not the 'light loving' ways.She hated it,ever since she had come her she was like a light to them,she didnt know what to do anymore.No she had lost her touch in 'killing'.She wouldnt let this happen nor let anyone let it happen.Again she remebered the rage held within her mind and soul,the hate and all other things,now it was all just screaming in her mind,screaming at her endlessly. wont it stop?make it stop,end this screaming,i didnt do anything the scream grew louder in her mind,it grew uncontrolable and unhandable to her.Blue orbs closed tightly ,she seemed to be spining round and round,she opened her orbs quickly then ......she screamed.Louder than ever had she screamed aloud,only for a moment had she though,then it ended,all the screaming in her mind.She felt like all eyes where one her now and none of that mattered.She was going crazy,something must be done..


[wow corny eh?][lol thought id spice things up and make em weird..lol][sorry no muse i would put more but its x mas so i gotta go for now will bbl]

[ecstasy]

wait for magick to finish. its his turn! no offense to any here, but this needs order. like..now. i won't stand for this anymore, and sorry magick, but if this continues im outta here. i can't stand this. no one waits for eachother to post as they should..its..irritating.call me spoiled.call me a tramp. call me whatever. i believe it rping right. let's make an effort.

[Temptation]

-growls- i had to much muse for dis post so i posted it Miss.Priss,so it wont hurt one bit since i could wait 100 days for him to finish so-----*nvm*

[Magick]

take these words
and make them your own
pretend to love me
let me live

scarred appex hung precariously from the top of his crest, waiting for any moment to come swinging down wildly on the sins of life. sure he had figured out the dire wants of each the minx's, but only one would be granted their wish. ironic was it not? how secretly, inwardly, each and every ess in existance desired the rank of head wench above all else? even if they denied it, claiming on their worthless lives how they detested the possibility, it was all true in the end. and why shouldn't they? the entire equine race was constantly wishing to get ahead. to come out on top. to rise above all competition. thorns followed the eeiry hoofalls of the departed pair, each movement detected and analyzed. quick nip was given atop ecstacy's rump, orbs narrowing dangerously. so, she showed her anxiousness more than the others. magick marked the czaress at once, the bold mare yet of course. so far that is, the first to express her extreme wanting of the job. deep rumble was brought from the king's barrel, turning itself into a sigh of longing. not merely for the dame before him, but for the herd's overall future. now what would he do? a decision was needed. and even with this pressure upon the land, the quiet duo weren't attempting to win over his heart with their luring charms. difficult now, aren't we?

and even if you can't see
what it is I want you to be
understand this at least
to live is to love
and to die
the greatest failure of all

ah rock. the constant presence in life. some find it early on, while others wait a lifetime to come across it. who would become his mentor? all three had their good qualities and bad. as he gazed out of his crimson pools, he considered and weighted all possible options. karma. quite the red hed now wasn't she? 'twasn't a terrible thing to be. nay, for this strength of mind was needed in a herd. to maintain order and keep the members in line. but the minx didn't seem to want him increasing the harem with others besides herself. this was an emense problem. perhaps it could be fixed with some...convincing later on. tempt. he couldn't ask for a more flirtatious specimen. smug chuckle brought it's way between his velveteens just thinking about it. however, she did have her alluring points besides her radiant beauty. for instance, the bruja seemed to be able to make peace and amends with others, a quality most darks didn't possess. and then there was ecstacy. who, from at first glance he had thought the most outgoing of the lot. the she was gorgeous in a deadly way, but also quite harsh for his liking. all would make tremendous choices and wonderful queens...in a strange sense, magick wished they could all be at a higher ranking. but nay. that wouldn't suffice nor benefit the harem in the slightest.

what is this
ringing in thyne ear
a challenge?
a sneak?
I dear say it is

smirk lighted onto his kissers, listing off the names again in his mind. karma. tempt. ecstacy. the internal clock was running out of time. tick. tock. decide now fool! decide or pay the price of misery. what's it worth to you aye? the lord nudged the ebon one again, trying her patience, when in fact, his was running out. suddenly a call was heard from afar. what? someone dare try and steal one of his precious jewels? the theif would pay...and dearly at that. adreneline pulsed through his stallion veins, the call met with a shrieking whinny. whoever it be, they wouldn't, couldn't get away with one of his diamonds. tassles were in dissaray as the fierce west wind mauled his chisled facade. boiling rage fought for control as he launched himself towards the sneaking grounds. on second thought, he turned back to the neutral ecstacy and called out.

this be your chance. take care of the lands. do not dissapoint me. I leave you in Maleck's mercy.

here I come
flying am I
do not try and defy me
lest you pay with your life

[ooc: -growls- someone's attempting to steal one of me luffs...I'll be back dearies.... ]

[pierre]

ooo!! [wimpers]hurry home luverly of mine

[ecstasy]

_{a hefty gaze settled over the fellow mares. ah, a peacemaker seemed this Tempt..peace. ah, a fool's misleading theory. a light's. a shrill call echoed before a gruff nudge was taken to the side of the bronc. another..to take one from him?! hah! so this was it. another called Magick from his home in a time of need. such stupidity, had this unknown bronc known what would be unleashed? a soft chuckle toned out from the depths of her vocals, nudging again at the bronc to see him off.i shall await your return. I, your latin godess. your gem. surely..surely all of us who you hold dear are too strong willed for any other to handle..may the darkened gods be with you. her statement was laid out casually, watching the large bronc slip off from the lands. off to a putrid land..one with no comparison to such as their own. yes, their land. belonging to all of them in shares. soon enough, magick's throne would be spliced..but for whom? oh..what was this? he was leaving her in charge? odd..yet quite satisfying to some extent. worry? ah, always. but worry for disappointing such a bronc? never...no, she had no intentions of disapproval from the loathsome king. ever. unless by chance. by the messing of time. that wasn't too common now was it? so..he left her to deal with his dirty work. all the more chance she had. wonderful. if her fellow mares thought of her as gruesome now, they had quite another thing coming. her in charge would mean no lightness, no forgiving. no time for apology. time for order. time for one to step up. a great responsibility lay, draped over her shoulders. he had given her the oppurtunity of a lifetime. his timing couldn't have been better. but what if one of the femmes were to be stolen? no worries. faith was one of the many things she held for the bruthen. much more was felt, though none to speak of at the time. none were needed..yet. a great duty must be filled..yes..to watch over the wonderous lands of Maleck whilst the bronc was dealing with a fool's challenge. subsiding her hatred for a moment, a light brush with her kissers over his pelt was taken before he set off.[that doesn't fit..oh well.]
[[still not done]]}

[Temptation]

Minx snaped wards ecstasy,and noded to Karma before she stormed from the lands,so be it.Had she had it with the presure of the 'new toy' for Magick,the question she brought to ask Karma,it all bothered he so more than normal,she left.She didnt know where she was going but she knew it would be better than this place,if the minx being stolen was her then so be it,maybe this hessian would bring more concern to 'matters'.She was being harsh she wasnt giving Magick time to express himself,but screw it,she didnt care,she was off to plains of 'peace' yeah right peace not for long at all,not with her on those plains.


so short but i posted in peace plains.

[ecstasy]

imma just start a new thread. mares of maleck; please post there.